Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Researching information for the extended essay

Researching information for the extended essay

Using Primo
Primo is the University’s library search engine which will search through the library’s book collection and electronic journals. To access Primo you should click on the drop-down menu ‘My Edesk’ and then click on ‘Library,  Media and IT (ILS)’. Scroll down and click on the Primo icon (shown below):
It is recommended that you always use the advanced search in Primo to select your sources more precisely.

Searching using a keyword or key expressions:
Search for all the articles with ‘sustainable development’ somewhere in the title.
1.       Set the first box displaying ‘Any’ to ‘in the Title’ using the drop-down arrow to the right;
2.       Type ‘sustainable development’ into the box to the right of ‘contains’;
3.       Click on the orange Search button below.
How many articles does it list?
To refine this search try:
·         Restricting the search to articles published in the ‘last 2 years’ by setting the Publication date;How many are listed now?
·         Now restrict the list to just books by setting the Material type;
How many are listed now?
How many of the books provide the full text online?

Viewing the text of electronic books
To look at the book by Peter Brandon, namely ‘Evaluating sustainable development in the built environment’:
1.       Click on the title in blue. This takes you to the Myilibrary page. Do not try to log in with your username and password – it will not work.

2.       Scroll down the page until you can see the text:
Athens
If you are an Athens user, please
click here to access the Athens Authentication Point »
Click on the orange text.
(Athens is an identity management service and allows you access to the full text of a range of books and journals available only to subscribers, in this case it is the University of Plymouth. You must be logged on to the University of Plymouth website to be able to use Athens to access texts online)
3.       You should now be able to read the text of the book. If not, it means that only a limited number can view the full text at the same time.
On the left of the text is a panel which allows you to view the Table of Contents (TOC tab) of the book, or you can search for text using the Search tab.
Above these tabs are three green tabs. Click on the one labelled ‘Bibliographic details’ to open it up to show the reference information. If you click on the Citation link then a box will display the correct form for the reference section of you work (choose APA).

4.       When you have finished viewing the text, you should log out of  Myilibrary by clicking on Logout in the top right corner of the page.

Finding a book in the Library using Primo
One of the sources in the text book ‘Extended writing and research skills’ is taken from the book ‘An introduction to sustainable development’ by Jennifer Elliott. This is a useful text which gives a good description of three aspects of sustainable development. To find this book use the advanced search in Primo and:
1.       Search for ‘sustainable development’ in the Title and ‘Elliott’ as Author/creator and set Material Type  to ‘Books’, as shown below

2.       Click on the book icon for the book in the list of books returned to get more information.

3.        Using the tabs ‘Find it’ and ‘Details’, answer the questions below:

What is the maximum period that you can take this book out?
How many copies are available to borrow?
What is the subject code of the book which you need to find it?
On which floor will you find this book?

Floor
Book codes
2
001 - 499
1
500 - 639
0
640 - 999

 Task 1:

1.       You need to find a copy of an item whose title contains ‘blueprint for a green economy’ but you do not know the name of the author. Search for this item.
What kind of item is it (journal article, book etc)?
Where can you find it (online, on a shelf etc)?
How many are available?
How long can you book it out for?

2.       By clicking on the Details tab, you can:
Note the details of the item:
Click on the ‘Table of contents’ link in the Links box on the right to get a description of the book:

3.       Read the description of the book and consider whether you think that it would be useful.

4.       Using the details of the item, write out the correct form of these for adding to a reference section in an essay.




Task 2:




1.       Search for an item by author Zhu Yongguan and others which is about health effects of urbanization in China.

2.       What is the actual title of the item?

3.       What kind of item is it (book, journal article etc)?

4.       Write out the correct form for the reference for this item.

5.       View the full text of this item (you will need to click Go beside the section ‘Full text available via American Chemical Society Journals’ on the Metalib page, shown to the right)


6.       The text of this item contains an interesting section on ‘Features of Urbanization in China’ which has some useful comments. Fill in the blanks in the text below:

“The proportion of the urbanized population in China has increased from _____ in 1978 to_____ in 2009 (Figure 1). It is expected that some _____ million people will be added to the country’s urban population by 2025, and 1 billion people will live in Chinese cities by ______.(8, 9)”

7.       This item also has some useful diagrams which can even be downloaded. How many diagrams does it contain?

Task 3:

1.       Use Primo to search for an article in the journal Nature, published in 2010 by Jane Qiu with the title ‘Q&A: Peter Hessler on urbanization in China’

2.       Write down the full reference for this article that you would put in the reference section of an essay.

3.       View the full text of this article – you will need to find the link to ‘login via Athens’ to get the full text.


Using Google Scholar
Google Scholar is an academic search engine that limits its searches to academic articles on the web.
1.       Search for an article by Hinrichsen and Robey on population and the environment
(Hinrichsen & Robey, 2000).

2.       Look at the full text and answer the following questions:

a.       What do we know about the authors?

b.      Is this an academic text?

c.       Does it have some helpful facts and statistics?

d.      Which sources have these authors used to get their information?

3.       What is your opinion of this article?

Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Sample definitions of Sustainable Development

Sustainable development is to think about continued environmental development in the future (Longman Dictionary, 1991).

According to English Nature (1993) sustainable development is to prolong the development of human life in the long term without destroying the natural environment.

The Longman Dictionary (1991) states that sustainable development is to give some support to continued development in the future and search for some new resources which can be used.

Error corrections 7th August 2012

Introduction:
Next year, the population of people living in the city could exceed the population of the country for the first time in history (China Daily, 2010).  Why do a lot of people who live in countries want go to cities? Maybe they expect to obtain better life. However is it a correct choice? Where is the best place to live for people?  For several reasons the city could be a healthier place to live.  This essay will focus on which is place healthier to live in the city or the country. It is divided into three parts to explain, first it will look at this in terms of physical health, second about psychological health and third financial health.

Some people want to live in the country, because the country’s nature is better than city. Scientists recognized that when people live in someplace which is  surrounded by a forest it is good for their health. They can get a relaxing feeling from the trees and the green colours, as well as listening to birds and other natural sounds (Bonner, 2010).       

Nevertheless, there are also health problems in the countryside. Most people do not have many things to do. After lunch they just sit and talk. Therefore, many people from the countryside are fat (Lui Qing, 2011)

Specifically, recent studies prove that heart issues and complications are directly related to living in a congested city with the stress and pollution. In the country, there are no health risks that can greatly affect and harm your heart. In the city, it's dangerous, crowded, stressful, polluted, crime rates are higher, there's food everywhere you turn and car traffic. In the country you can find peace, quiet, soothing environments, less pollution, smaller communities that build better relationships with one another.(……..)COPIED

In Mexico City, “12,903 people had been killed in violence blamed on organized crime from January to September 2011”(BBC News, 2012). These numbers make it clear that living in a city is very dangerous, particularly in some large urban areas.
Not only people in cities can be dangerous, but just drinking water or breathing can harm us. There is much pollution in the city, such as air pollution and water pollution. It can cause damage to our health among other problem.  In can invade the body on anyone because some dirty air and water could absorbed by people through breathing and drinking.
In a large city there are a large number of people.  Large amounts of people means more houses and buildings to live in and work in are needed.  Also in the city farming land is limited therefore does not satisfy all the city inhabitants needs, and furthermore the city is not a quality environment for farming. However there are new types of farms which are using minimal space in urban areas.  In addition they are able to sell their produce in the same location where they grow, therefore reducing all transportation costs.  So in terms of food transport costs, city farming is cheaper than rural farming, IF YOU CONSIDER THAT ALL FOOD FROM RURAL AREAS NEEDS TO BE transported to cities either by road, rail or ship.

By developing of urban population, the cities can not provide enough food and job opportunities for people in most developing countries. (Sunday, 2009) Therefore, the ‘Home Town Farms’ could resolve those problems, which is a plan for city farming. This plan would solve five problems. The first one is that reduce the cost of food. For example……………….. It means that people would pay less money for their food and get better quality, because there is less damage in transportation. The second one is water saving.  This is due to…………... The third is fuel saving and less carbonemissons.  As mentioned above………….. (Vertical Organic Urban Farming, 2009)

In addition, Manhattan has a 30 floor high-rise indoor farm, which could provide enough food for 50000 people per day. As a result, the tower could produce enough food and feed everyone in Manhattan. Besides, the tower farm saves a lot of places to plant food which means different foods are planted in different levels, such as strawberry and apples are in some level, but the beans are upstairs (Deweerdt, 2010). "The very best reason for indoor farming is that you save outdoor land for something else," (Despommier as cited Deweerdt, 2010, page ……….)

Wednesday, August 1, 2012

ESSAY TITLE HOMEWORK

Choose one of the following essays and answer to be completed by Monday 6th August 15.30

You can email your work if you wish

Is city farming the future? Compare and contrast the effectiveness of urban and rural food production

Is it healthier (physically, pschologically and financially) to live in the city or the country?  Explain your answer with 2 case studies


You must use at least:
1 book source, 1 journal, 1 website (all English Language only)

NEW ASSESSED ESSAY TITLE

“Identify and analyse the key problems of urbanisation and suggest and evaluate solutions which would form part of a policy of sustainable development”

CONCLUSION CHECKLIST

Conclusion checklist
1.   A brief summary of main ideas in the essay
2.   Comments on these ideas
3.   Predictions for further development of the topic
4.   Mention of further research that might be required
5.   Limitations of the work covered by your essay
6.   A reference back to the thesis statement first mentioned in the introduction